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Post by Chibi Jen on Jan 1, 2005 20:03:42 GMT 10
Hey nick, you've written some very good poems here I enjoyed reading them. ' is too much for one man to handle' is a interesting statement, because guys don't usually admit they cant handle something ^^ So that just means you're truthful in what you write and express. Well done. I hope you write some more to share with us.
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ShadowSpinner
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hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Jan 2, 2005 1:15:55 GMT 10
'is too much for one man to handle' that is intresting. But its cool that you can addmit it. I know alot of guys who wouldent addmitt it if thier lifes depended on it.
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gekogoth009
Chibi Guardian
so I am breakable................
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Post by gekogoth009 on Jan 6, 2005 4:20:17 GMT 10
well,i hate men,and i try to be accepting of my life,so i try to be as realalistic,and as truthfull as possible
Another back turnd another face unknown you were once my friend now look at what i'v done to us it was once me and you aganst the world now its me aganst the world you were my back bone you made my smile,engraved in stone my love for you,was always shown but you took advantage of me and now i can see how artifical and hypocritacal you are what i was loving was nothing but a illusion just a state of your confusion
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Post by Chibi Jen on Jan 6, 2005 10:05:32 GMT 10
Hey, neat poem XD (YAY, you finally got lines spaces...teehee)
Some lines I liked: you made my smile,engraved in stone
how artifical and hypocritacal you are what i was loving was nothing but a illusion just a state of your confusion
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ShadowSpinner
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hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Jan 7, 2005 8:32:44 GMT 10
wow thats so good. Your poems are so deep! they show alot!!!!do any of these poems have somethin to do with your life?
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gekogoth009
Chibi Guardian
so I am breakable................
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Post by gekogoth009 on Jan 19, 2005 6:10:26 GMT 10
most are about my dad leaving me,and my gf ...well my most recent one,she was the most crushing
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gekogoth009
Chibi Guardian
so I am breakable................
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Post by gekogoth009 on Jan 19, 2005 6:16:53 GMT 10
c'mon,c'mon,cmon say it,say yes c'mon,c'mon,c'mon say u will
(I asked u out) you turned me down like swallowing gas and not dieing now here we are,once more I feel so out of place so anoying just c'mon...
this time say it say it,say yes c'mon,c'mon,c'mon say it,say it baby,just say yes just c'mon
I know we'll never start but its not like me to give up or walk away just leave somthing alone but i wanna hear u say it or even on a record so i could play it just c'mon read the notes (read'em and weep)
(c'mon,c'mon)
sitting hear watching my memories of u,dear listening to taking back sunday (taking back...heh) you ask me all these o-so easy questions but i love the way u sit with me as awkward as it seems (i just love the way u sit with me,when im seconds away)
c'mon...
like my heart this empty dish,is mocking birds dont mock and gold fish arnt gold but when they are,i know u will say yes
c'mon......
you asked me four words "do u love me" with out a hezatation i ansered then i came home went back,with a shatered heart
c'mo....ah just forget it I know u never loved me (like i wish u did) broken down so what now fast fowered,or rewined i feel like i will never shine agan but i know ill get over it crushing blow hit so low feeling the pain,remeaning same pace,o so slow
(this one,is a song,its about the first time i asked a chik on my bus out)
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ShadowSpinner
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hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Jan 19, 2005 9:11:11 GMT 10
oh sorry for bringing up anything that you dident want to! but keep writeing these poems they are really good.
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gekogoth009
Chibi Guardian
so I am breakable................
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Post by gekogoth009 on Jan 20, 2005 3:56:54 GMT 10
o,its quite alright,i have to hear her on the bus talking to the kid that punched me,that she befriended right after he did,talk about other ways she will use another person in her mind
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Post by Chibi Jen on Jan 20, 2005 20:41:38 GMT 10
Hey, interesting poem you have here Nick. It has a nice beat to it
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ShadowSpinner
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hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Jan 21, 2005 6:21:19 GMT 10
well...dont think ive ever had to put up with being dumped before so i dont understand much but I guess your over it alittle hm?
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gekogoth009
Chibi Guardian
so I am breakable................
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Post by gekogoth009 on Jan 21, 2005 8:58:31 GMT 10
yeah,I just keep rembering that,only you can slow you down,I could walk through a hallway of rusty nails,but i can make the choice,of running,or walking,so i always remeber that
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ShadowSpinner
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hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Jan 21, 2005 9:24:58 GMT 10
thats a good thing to remember! next time i need advise ill asik you!!!11
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gekogoth009
Chibi Guardian
so I am breakable................
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Post by gekogoth009 on Jan 22, 2005 9:08:35 GMT 10
*gives you a jacket that says "hi,i am not a taco"* okie dokie ^_^
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ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Jan 22, 2005 9:44:06 GMT 10
haLol *do i sound like a taco?* do you have any advise on what to do when your friends lie to you and are acting completely diffrent?
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