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Post by SailorGenesis on Mar 14, 2005 12:59:21 GMT 10
Wintertime Snow is on the ground Several inches thick, Just right for sledding and snowmen. Children bundled up in coats Having snowball fights Making angels in the snow. Inside parents are decorating the tree With fires roaring in the hearth. Presents will be under trees soon. In July Only wishful thinking.
Soul Search As I stand here on this high hill Looking down at the people below me, I wonder what I should do. Many choices are spread out before me, My decision will affect the rest of my like. Should I go with the crowd and forever be a follower? Or take the unbeaten path and blaze a trail for myself And whoever dares to follow? I must decide soon or the crowd will come And the choice made for me.
Appearances Three solitary figures Moving through the fog. Continental soldiers Dressed in full regalia. Marching single file Never talking, not noticing Anything around them. Coming out of fog They become students, Their regalia coats and backpacks.
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Post by Sailor Comett on Mar 14, 2005 13:14:07 GMT 10
Excellent!! I really liked 'Appearances'. Do you write a lot? It seems very well thought through. I write a lot of poetry myself, it's very cathartic, no? Anyway, you're good, I like
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Post by SailorGenesis on Mar 14, 2005 13:50:00 GMT 10
I normally write fanfiction or original fiction. It's very rare that I write poetry- something has to strike me just right. These were written several years ago.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Mar 14, 2005 19:33:26 GMT 10
ooo.. Chibi likes ^^, esp Soul Search and Appearances.. Soul Search seriously reminds me of my Area of Study in English: "The Journey" (Related to Robert Frost's Road not Taken) "Never go where the Path may lead, go instead where there's no path, and leave a trail" -Emerson XD Yes.. I felt like adding that quote there..lol...Its in my head o.o Anyhows, love ur work! Write some more stuff to share
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