Forbidding Love

[LexofForbidinglove]

You may of read this already, but Death Soldier said I should put this up here.

www.angelfire.com/stars3/cammysaturn/Fanfic.html

I want to thank Death Soldier for editing it for me. It was bad when I first wrote it. I would love to give her something for it too. I guess I need to make a award for editing and seeing how hard it was to edit.

I have planed a 2nd "The End" after I finish this. But if you do like it, I had something special in mind for "The End"

[Chibi Jen]

Ah yes, I've read ur fan fic before ^_^ It's pretty good I think. There were some interesting ideas you thought up with.. and it could lead to many possibilities. Just try to make it unexpecting, and add some twists to it

[LexofForbidinglove]

The second one will have a GOOD Twist! When I thought of it and I was blown away! But am getting ahead of myself Am almost done with Act 5. Am remaking the characters for the next one. I wanted to call it, "The End". But then I thought I should call it something else now.


EDIT:

For those who did read it. I got some questions for you. I like to make the story perfect.

1. How would you rate this story? One of the best? Or ok? Or BLAME THIS CRAP!

2. What do you think of the relationship with Lex and Hotaru? Lex and Rini?

3. What do you think Lex is?

4. What do you think will happen at the end of act 5?

5. What do you think the end of the story would be like?

6. Should Mistress 9 be in it? (Am thinking about it)

7. Should there be more dialoge?




NOTE: I just finished Act 5. I sent it to DS for editing.