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Post by sailorfire on Nov 10, 2004 18:02:56 GMT 10
hmm it sounds like you are describing sailor venus but even if you are not, it is very cool, for 10 minutes!
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Post by Digital Leonardo on Nov 10, 2004 18:08:02 GMT 10
DING DING DING! WE hAve a WINNER! Sailor Venus is who it is!!! Orange Silk, Blond Hair^^ Hehe. Now, I guess you guys by now can see I have Venus on the Brain.
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Post by Sailor Comett on Nov 12, 2004 12:51:25 GMT 10
I liked it, well done ;D I don't like, however, how she said it was a little repetitive... it's a poem! repetition is a well acknowledged poetic device! lol, oh well...
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Post by Digital Leonardo on Jun 9, 2005 8:31:40 GMT 10
These were for English... They were part of a joint booklet for my final project. 'Mosquito' (2005)
Crawling over bright flesh Long dark legs itching every step Filtering eyes, watching every inch It smells the blood, rushing under the skin Its lips water at the feel of every touch Breaking the rose ice Shattering the surface Gushing Splattering An ocean of crimson seep Sipping Endearing A buffet of red water devoured in seconds Full Done Its lagre wings flap It buzzes by like a blind bat The Blood Addicting Alcoholic 'Cat' (2005)
A Cat Nothing but a filthy rat Crawling around the unclean streets Fighting for a peice of mean
Untamed Hair Diamond sharp glair Pure yellow eyes Given nine sinly lives
A full blown killer In the body Of a dirty little Rat 'Hunted' (2005)
I run, I hide, I try to escape the fear, My feet tire, I must have been running for hours.
The roars and growls echo threw the ally, It's following me, Its foot steps crush the broken glass spread along the ground.
I tried to yell for help, I try to scream, I fail to make a noise.
Dead End, I pound on the brick wall, My hands start to bleed, i try to break out, I try.
It comes closer I pound on the brick wall again.
My life flashes before me, Events I rejoiced, And Events I despised.
It comes closer, I close my eyes, I know the end is finally here.
Bang!
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Post by Sailor Comett on Jun 9, 2005 8:38:22 GMT 10
Most excellent Digilee!! Especially 'Cat'... although I love cats and have been a cat person all my life, I really liked it! I love this line!
In 'Mosquito' I loved this: Great stuff!! I wouldn't be shocked to see this stuff published. How multi-talented are you!!!!
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Post by Digital Leonardo on Jun 30, 2005 10:08:36 GMT 10
Most excellent Digilee!! Especially 'Cat'... although I love cats and have been a cat person all my life, I really liked it! I love this line! In 'Mosquito' I loved this: Great stuff!! I wouldn't be shocked to see this stuff published. How multi-talented are you!!!! Your to nice! Mulit-talented? No... not really. I killed to make those poems... something I don't do on my free time. School only, and maybe request... Anyways, everyone thanks for nicenice comments!
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