sailorcomett - The Last Great Innocent

[Sailor Comett]

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The Last Great Innocent

As I sit alone to think
About my life and what I've done.
I cannot help but start to think
What happened to the sun?

So I ask you this now
Do you hear me when I call?
Your silence tells me nothing
But the answer to it all.

I was once just like you
But now I think I'm beaten.
The last of the great innocents
Has finally been defeated.

I want to sleep I'm feeling nauseous
But I know that if I did
The demons would come and they are angry
And I would do what they bid.

You don't understand why I still smile?
My dear, it's plain to see,
I wouldn't want to the world to fuss
They can just leave me be.
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[Chibi Jen]

This one is another great poem

I liked the lines:
So I ask you this now
Do you hear me when I call?
Your silence tells me nothing
But the answer to it all.


The title is confusing me though... I'm wondering why it's called 'The Last Great Innocence'
Its sounds like you've lost your innocence because you did something guilty...

[Sailor Comett]

It is about the loss of innocence, but it's about someone who was a 'great innocent', but something happened in their life that destroyed it.

[Death Soldier]

Interesting poem I agree with ChibiJen..I like that little section

[PayPay]

It was a very beautiful poem. ^^