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Post by newbert on Oct 25, 2003 12:23:29 GMT 10
wearing a ring is like wearing a band aid it will heal the pain temporarily but will it keep him faithful.
And when it's time, to remove that band aid, all you are left with are the scars
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Post by Chibi Jen on Oct 25, 2003 13:09:28 GMT 10
Hey Newbert ^_^ That's a very interesting poem you have written... never really thought of it that way. Good job I'm glad to see you start posting poems.
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Post by Death Soldier on Nov 1, 2003 15:58:08 GMT 10
Very small cute poem newbert~where did you get that idea from @_@?? Are you referring to someone particular when you used the word "him"?
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Post by newbert on Nov 19, 2003 20:40:51 GMT 10
no .... i was wearing a ring and it felt so uncomfortable ...like wearing a bandaid ..when i cut it there last time .. so i just synthesized.....refering to no one in particular....it just made me think about the people who know their partners have been cheating on them and think that by getting married it will make things ok... but it doesnt stop him from committing adultry.... i refer to him ...as i am a gal ...and it would seem gay if i said her .
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Post by newbert on Nov 19, 2003 20:42:07 GMT 10
soorry for the bad gramma and spelling ....im just a bit lzy when i type...and i know its a bad habit
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Post by Chibi Jen on Nov 19, 2003 21:24:38 GMT 10
Wow..good job though.. it shows that you are good with empathising with others I guess ^_^ Anyhow- you're very correct. And it shows it so much in soapies such as B&B. They keep getting married, but every couple breaks up and re marries at least 4 time ;D I know I know, this is totally off topic..but yeah- what do you expect? It is just a stupid soapie (no offence to anyone)
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Post by newbert on Nov 20, 2003 15:56:39 GMT 10
i dont know if you would call it empathize ....more liek analyse...
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Post by Death Soldier on Nov 20, 2003 16:08:36 GMT 10
0_o I didn't realise such a simple-looking short poem had that kind of meaning behind it.
If I didn't know you newbert, I'd think that you experienced that...or have you >.<? hehe..
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Post by newbert on Nov 20, 2003 16:32:38 GMT 10
hahah....do i look old enuf to have had experienced nething....more like lack there of...... it's not even legal to get married at my age...
yes well to all those ppl who dont know me...no i havent been in a marriage..nor have i been in any real or serious relationship with someone of the opposite sex or of the same sex ...if people begin to question my preferences
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Post by sailorfire on Jan 28, 2004 7:27:44 GMT 10
nice poem, how profound...ponders...
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