Death Soldier
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Post by Death Soldier on Sept 27, 2003 14:29:21 GMT 10
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Who am I?
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My soul is yours, my master
Drowned in Darkness
where I belong...
No feelings nor emotions
What are feelings and emotions?
No light to life
Silent Destruction
What is there to fear?
Freedom?
I don't own myself
It's completely yours, my master.
Who am I? I am no one ...
I am Death Soldier
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Post by newbert on Sept 28, 2003 15:41:14 GMT 10
wow a poem....did u make that up?
you have the disposition to believe that evil, darkness and pain in the world is not compensated for by the good and happiness...why is that?
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Post by Chibi Jen on Sept 28, 2003 16:10:26 GMT 10
True. Death Soldier's poem is a bit freaky I must admit. She seems to lack good or happiness... ^_^ I guess she'll have to answer that question herself.
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Post by Death Soldier on Oct 7, 2003 15:10:41 GMT 10
wow a poem....did u make that up? you have the disposition to believe that evil, darkness and pain in the world is not compensated for by the good and happiness...why is that?
I don't quite understand what you mean, newbert. Anyhow, yes, I did make up that poem. I made this up for the character 'Death Soldier', which, in fact isn't myself, if you get what I mean. Like my character?
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Post by Death Soldier on Oct 19, 2003 17:56:30 GMT 10
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Death Soldier's Coffin
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I lie in here
Asleep, trapped
Waiting for the morning light...?
Light that never shines
In the World of darkness
Locked in my own nightmares
Chains of horror
What is behind all this,
freedom?
Yet- this chain is apart of me
And I?
Who am I?
I do not need to know..
I hear your voice echo,
my master
Throughout my mind and soul
the voice I must obey
Tis' my only purpose in life
Life?
It is a meaningless word
I remain dormant
In the place I belong
Ignorant of human life
Suffering is such great joy
I hear your voice my master,
Yes master...
Death Soldier has resurrected
Rising from the dead
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Post by Chibi Jen on Oct 25, 2003 16:00:17 GMT 10
 umm.... everybody who read that poem.... do not believe what Death Soldier believes! ^_^;; okay? It's not good for you...heehehe.... Interesting Insights DS! But they aren't good thoughts.
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Death Soldier
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Post by Death Soldier on Oct 7, 2004 16:25:53 GMT 10
Hm..I seem to like writing these types of poems- an element of dark and evil. Not the best poems ever written, but gives some ideas to the background of the character.
I actually wrote this before I used DeathSoldier in the RPG..I guess this made it easier for me in creating it. It is relevant for insights into the actual character.
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Post by sailorfire on Oct 7, 2004 21:28:13 GMT 10
Actually... this reminds me; i used to have these strange morbid thoughts...
but now, no more... i think happy thoughts, but the poetry is good!
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Post by Death Soldier on Nov 15, 2004 8:28:55 GMT 10
For a friend
I never thought you were worthy of my trust
I never thought we could get along
I never thought you really felt that way
I never thought there would be someone like you
I never thought I’d know the real you
I never thought you would trust me
I never thought you’re different from the inside
I never thought you’d tell me what you did
I never thought you would keep your words
I never thought I’d share me thoughts with you
But now I do,
And I’ll keep our promise
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Post by Sailor Comett on Nov 15, 2004 8:41:17 GMT 10
Good poems DS  They are a bit dark aren't they  I like that, gives an insight into her lack of autonomy and allegiance to another... |
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Post by Sakura on Nov 21, 2004 0:56:01 GMT 10
Good poems DS They are a bit dark aren't they yeah, I agree with Sailor Comett ^_^" They are a bit dark, but overall, I like them lol |
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Post by LexofForbidinglove on Dec 8, 2004 10:35:31 GMT 10
You do have good skills in writing. Just like how you edited my fan fic. Nice job!
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<--Thanks ChibiJen!!
umm.... everybody who read that poem.... do not believe what Death Soldier believes! ^_^;; okay? It's not good for you...heehehe.... 
They are a bit dark aren't they 
