Ryohei
Chibi Teen
I shall atone for my sins one by one
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Post by Ryohei on Nov 7, 2003 16:50:54 GMT 10
What's in a name that defines us so? Do we havea reason to call us by them? You should only see who they are, and thus name them by what they do
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Post by Chibi Jen on Nov 7, 2003 17:07:58 GMT 10
I understand what you mean... but we aren't objects ^_^;;;
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Ryohei
Chibi Teen
I shall atone for my sins one by one
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Post by Ryohei on Nov 8, 2003 3:05:13 GMT 10
Now whoever said we were? That was from shakespeare's Romeo and Julitet when romeo talks to juliet form the balcony willing to give up his name becuase it means nothing. The deed part is my addition. No one is an object. Althouh at times we may acdt like it they aren't. A person is a person.
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~Shy Kitten~
Shining Chibi
/%%/--I'm in love and lovin' it=^_^=/%//%/%--Singing,Writing poems,ect./%/
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Post by ~Shy Kitten~ on Nov 8, 2003 7:00:16 GMT 10
No one knows
no one knows what it's like to be the sad one to be the bad one but in my dreams thats where i'll see you and i'll touch you again but your lips taste so real but all I have you as is just this thought no one knows what it's like to be me to see me to touch me but in my dreams thats where i'll find you and i'll laugh and play with you.
These tears
these tears that stream down my face after your warm embrace they come out of joy and happyness and laughter and fun and it's your heart that I have finally won even after the second I saw you I knew that love was there for me and you.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Nov 8, 2003 12:54:55 GMT 10
Great poems as usual ShyKitten ^_^ but about that line "no one knows what it's like to be the sad one" is kind of untrue ^_^;; everybody knows how it feels, because we have all been through it. It's natural.
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~Shy Kitten~
Shining Chibi
/%%/--I'm in love and lovin' it=^_^=/%//%/%--Singing,Writing poems,ect./%/
Posts: 112
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Post by ~Shy Kitten~ on Nov 8, 2003 13:37:34 GMT 10
I know it was more of like a song than a poem kinda you know
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~Shy Kitten~
Shining Chibi
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Post by ~Shy Kitten~ on Nov 29, 2003 11:55:31 GMT 10
How?
How do you kiss how did I miss how can I fly away how is it that they love me but how? I just don't see one loves me so much he would die for me and the other is so romantic yet I should just them both be I care for them yes as really good friends yet I should just make amends but they know about me and care for me deeply one would even go down on one knee so how?
This distance
This distance between us is to much but I love you and your kisses and such but now it's become too much now you don't write,never call I just want to curl up into a ball.
What now?
why now of all times I thought but I guess our love will just rot why are you acting this way what now? just let out love stray I can't and I won't because I don't so please tell me.....what now? whats wrong and how? why let it end like this so what now?
Goodnight
goodnight world and body of mine for now it will shine my soul leaves my body lying there alone and yet fare it watches as I go and yet I still want to know but just for now i'll say goodnight and I hope you sleep tight for i'll be watching you always even if it's just more than 6 days goodnight.
With these wings
with these wings i'll flyaway and I will not hurt but obey I love you yet you do not to me but how can this be I see you everyday but I just move away for even though I migt have wings I can not sttle these things.
In my heart
i'm in your arms as I take my last breath for now I know how it feels for it is death I see the tears stream down your face for the last night I was alive I was in your warm embrace but as I lift from my body we will never be apart for you will alway be in my heart.
Someday
someday you'll see me someday i'll be free someday you'll kiss me and give me a hug and i'll be all warm and snug and someday I will see you and I will be true for someday you will fing me and I will say hi to the.
It took a minute
it took a minute for me to find my way home yet you were rite beside me I was still alone do these tears mean nothing to you? or will you not get it till an hour or two i'm rite infront of you but i'm not I bet you would notice if I got shot yet for you and me it only takes a minute to go by yet you don't even know that i'm left here to cry.
This is my life
A father that doesn't care a life that isn't fare a romance that I wish I had something that could be bad something that could be something you wouldn't see guys that love me so much that it would be like gold to touch even though i'm not as pretty as most girls even though they probably have curls but this is my life and I have to deal with it even though I might have a fit.
What I feel
I hate i'm great I love i'm a dove i'm good i'm bad i'm sad i'm mad i'm cool I rule I thirst I burst I need I feed i'm a friend and I bend but I feel too and yet at the same time I know that you do too cause thats what I feel inside and I will always be by your side cause that what I feel.
It Only took a minute
It only took a minute to let you in my life and maybe someday i'll be your wife but rite now i'm looking into your eyes knowing that theirs a surprise yet it only took a minute for me to fall in love for you'll tell me i'm as beautiful as a dove and it only took a minute.
Fallen
i've fallen so hard that I even let down my guard you look at me and my heart stops and when you kiss me my hair drops for it's love and thats all you can say and it's so fun to be with you even for a day for i've fallen so deep into that ocean of yours for theirs so much of it it pours cause i've fallen in love with you and I think it's new.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Dec 6, 2003 18:01:20 GMT 10
Wow..really good poems..good insights, and very easy to relate to. Yep *claps*claps* That first poem sounds like you were stuck in the middle.... ^^;; All of your poems have a nice rythem to them all.... Keep writting !
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~Shy Kitten~
Shining Chibi
/%%/--I'm in love and lovin' it=^_^=/%//%/%--Singing,Writing poems,ect./%/
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Post by ~Shy Kitten~ on Dec 6, 2003 18:15:09 GMT 10
the first one was written about the show Inu Yasha
Your love for her
you love her and you love me but how could this be I stand here watching you two kiss even though it was hard to miss you care for me yet you care for her more I wish I could just go in my room and shut the door but why? why her over me maybe for us it wasn't meant to be.
Your brown eyes
your brown eyes are so beautiful and mysterious for not even the heavens above could compare to yours for your kiss is but a simple thing I ask for and your touch of hand would be even more for your brown eyes tell me all even if you don't call I would still love you after all.
Your touch
your touch is just to much my heart flutters and beats faster everytime that I know that you are mine you slightly touch my hand as if it was something you could not withstand.
Your smile
your smile makes me last for awhile for it lights up the room and it makes me want to swoon as you walk into the room it lets me know that i'm in love with you and your in love with me so... their's not much to say for i'm speachless cause it's your smile that make me smile for quite awhile.
That moment
in that moment with my eyes looking into yours and my heart fluttering about it wanted me to kiss you it wanted me to shout so you held my hanf and kissed my neck and I just blushed for a sec but when it was all done you held me tight as if it were your best night and in that moment our passion ran wild yet now the passion is mild for nothing will be like it was that night for it was the moment you held me tight.
Three
I want you and you want me yet their are three I spend my days and nights with you yet that is something he wont do you make me laugh and blush and when ever i'm with you it's such a rush yet their are three so this will be the last night I spend wit the.
Do you see me
do you see me like I see you or were the words you said to me not true you say you ment what you said but i'm here in my bed waiting for you to call yet you never do maybe I should just dump you yet do you see me? no but I see you yet you dont care that I was rite there so.....do you see me?
Go on
go on make me breathless make me stress this your lips are like milk and honeywhen I kiss them and your so thin I love you and thats all the words i've got yet this woman isn't gonna be bought so go on get out you've made me so mad I just want to shout so go on.
Take me away
take me away from this place I don't care where just as long as i'm with your pretty face take me far away some where I can stay with some one that cares and that will buy me a house with stairs so take me away please i'm hoping that I don't freeze so take me away.
My Feelings
my feelings are weird and they're feared they're complicated and stupid even when I get hit by cupid yet when i'm sad I get deep into deepression I wish you would stop with this lesson you hurt them and control them in your hand like i'm a prisoner that was band cause their mine not yours and now i've got so many bruises and soars from my past and present yet you make it seem like i'm a pesent and they're mine my feelings.
All I need
all I need right now is for you to wrap your arms around me tight and tell me everything is alright for you to kiss me and sweep me off my feet for you to tell me I smell so sweet for you to let me lay on your chest for you to tell me i'm the best for you to say i'm beautiful and that I look great for you to say i'm your soulmate cause all I need is you and that is all I need.
My thanks to all
I thank my mother and my brother I thank you and I thank Andrew I thank 21 for being someone in my life I thank all of you at MoonFantasy for being friends with me I thank my cat for being cute and fat and I thank shy for being a cool sis and one day I will miss all of this but not yet not now but for rite now here's my thanks to all.
My inner beauty
it has a cool laugh and it has a blast but sometimes it's hard to find and sometimes I can be blind and I say i'm ugly but my beauty is skin deep even though i'm still something you want to keep for you lift me up then down and you never make me frown.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Dec 6, 2003 18:31:52 GMT 10
*sniff sniff* The first poem is sooooo sad Aww...poor Kagome.. Why is it that your Inu yasha based poems are sooo good? All of them are good. hhehe....I like the MF one too People who isn't at MF in this forum wouldnt probably understand it, but it;s still good. *Is happy is in MF*
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Post by sienna on Dec 6, 2003 22:12:39 GMT 10
Hi ShyKitten! I finally got through all of your poems (I've been away from this for awhile so I had a bit of catching up to do ) Your poems are really nice, and I like alot of the metaphors you used in the more recent ones. There are a few lines in a lot of them that are really moving. My favourite poem so far is 'A Smile and A Frown'. Just remember to do a bit of editing, cos I wasn't sure if some of the words were the right ones or if they were just spelt incorrectly I like your rhyming as well, you should experiment on changing the patterns around, like instead of making them AABBCC make them something like ABAB - just a suggestion You should try writing poems in free verse too, experimenting always gets the creative juices flowing They're really good though, don't stop writing!
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~Shy Kitten~
Shining Chibi
/%%/--I'm in love and lovin' it=^_^=/%//%/%--Singing,Writing poems,ect./%/
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Post by ~Shy Kitten~ on Dec 7, 2003 10:59:27 GMT 10
thank you well here's some more
You make me cry
you make me wonder and think you make me blush and blink you make me cry you make me sigh you make me want to leave you and lately thinking about you makes me blue you never call and don't write to me anymore it's like you just shut the door on our love ad it hurts like my heart is breaking and you don't care this isn't fare you should feel what i'm feeling rite now but your not cause you'd rather act like a tot but you never know whats going on behind the scenes yet do you even know what this means probably not but you make me cry for you yet what do you do? nothing..you play your video games and hangout with your friends and you make me cry and you don't even care so i'll just walk out of your life and maybe that would be fare.
Moving on(with my life)
I can't stand this pain it's from you and this big stain you left inside my heart and rite now we're so far apart and it's your fault I need so much attention from boys like I need to play with them when i'm bord like my toys but they're not yet I feast and strivefor attention from them but it's not like i'm slim but i'm moving on wether you like it or not like i'm something you could spot yeah rite I hope I never see you again yet I just know I will and I might just stand still or not but you know what i'm moving on without you oh so called father of mine so i'm moving on with my life.
And you were there
I first talked to you by PM and you were so sweet like someone i'd like to meet someone that would treat me rite and say goodnight someone that would hold my hand and dance with me in the rain no matter if I had a pain in my heart from a past lover or what not you made me smile and it would last for quite a while and when I was sad you would make me happy and glad and if you had a cookie or something you would share with me and you were there for me.
A moment in time
when we met I knew that their was something there it was probably something in the air I looked at you and you looked at me like we were ment to be but for a moment in time it wasn't a crime for me to place my lips on yours or for me to get a touch of your hand and right now i'm flying and I don't want to land and now I look back and now love is something I don't lack.
I'm still here
why did you betray me as if it was not ment to be I think of you at night and wondering what could have been rite I thought I loved you but it was just something to say but rite now i'm not okay but i'm still here if needed as a friend and i'm sure that this will just blow away in the wind yet I can not forgive what you have done for you were number one but now your not but i'm still here.
Your love
is so sweet it's something as good as a treat and your cool and cute and it's a goodthing your not mute and your smile makes me giggle and blush cause when i'm with you it's a rush and I know you love me cause this is as good as it could be and your voice is so relaxing for it's your love.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Dec 11, 2003 19:17:02 GMT 10
Aww...that first poem is so sad.... That guy doesn't know who he is missing out..that's so slack. I reckon he isn't worth your crying... I think it's probably better for you, that he's out of your life..but who knows *shrugs* Your other poems are also really good..hehehe..it seems like a story, yet not in order ^_^;; Good job!
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~Shy Kitten~
Shining Chibi
/%%/--I'm in love and lovin' it=^_^=/%//%/%--Singing,Writing poems,ect./%/
Posts: 112
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Post by ~Shy Kitten~ on Dec 12, 2003 2:21:30 GMT 10
thank you^_^
To hear your voice
to hear your voice over the phone lets me know i'm not alone and the way your so calm makes me want to be calm and the way you look at me lets me see the ways you like me and want to be with me and the way you talk makes me want to walk with you, and not be blue and the way you don't care what others think makes me wonder and blink cause to hear your voice makes me blush and want to be with you more and I am always wondering what you have instore.
This is too hard
you don't understand what i'm going through it's just too hard even though you never gave me those cards i'm confused and crying yet you've been lying and I want to break up with you yet at the same time I don't and I won't but I should but what is it that keeps me from doing it this is just too hard maybe I should sit but I don't want this to be goodbye and at the same time I just know i'll cry but this is too hard for anybody to do and I know i'll miss you but with you it's not even fasing your mind and I was too kind this is too hard.
The End
i've always dreamt about having that one guy sweeping me off my feet and how he would be so sweet yet why can't you be like that why couldn't you bend over and tip your hat instead you don't call and don't write and I used to have a goodnight but not now, you've made it to where my heart is breaking and for some reason when you say that you like me more than a friend it just seems like your faking so is this The End but I want to spend time with you but I can't cause it's The End.
Why did you do it
why did you make me fall in love with you because rite now your making me so blue I don't want to wait till May so i'll just say goodbye and get it over with but to you....you probably wouldn't care because to me this isn't fare so why did you do it why did you not care about me was it just something you couldn't see i'm siting here crying over you and not really sure of what to do so why did you do it?
Theirs no waking up
as I lay here with a knife in my hand I get up and stand I think for just a moment and then stare thinking that life isn't fare so then I put the cold metal through my heart knowing that deth is to start because their is no waking up.
Waiting
I wait time and time again and even though theirs some pain I need to wait till I can see you and when I do I wont be blue but what if you hangout with them and not me I guess then we'll see so i'll just have to keep waiting.
Torment
go ahead torment me I wont be bothered by it you see you can tease and joke but at the end of the day i'll choke or break down in tears cause of you but atleast now you'll see what you do and at the end of the day I get a gun knowing that life can't be won I pull the triger and scream knowing when I wake up it was all a dream.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Dec 19, 2003 15:37:41 GMT 10
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