Saphira's Poems

[Saphira]

I'm not so good at this... Anyway, here's one of my poems...

Destiny

I see myself always with you
But fate is telling us not to be together
I know it hurts but it's all true
Yet still I wish we'll be forever

Whenever I am with you, I am me
Each day, I am longing to see you
But obstacles are avoiding me, I just let it be
Though I hate it and I want your view

Fate is calling me to let you go
Is this the end or the beginning?
It's quite unfair but a lesson to know
We're not compatible and we need a new thing

I don't want to lose you
But I guess it's the right way
And I hope that you know
That I'm still here for you anyway

So I'll step out in your heart
Let's continue our journey of life
Though it really hurts that we're now apart
Just remember you once had me in your life...

[Chibi Jen]

hey, that's quite good..especially towards the end ^^

Great job, post some more when you've written some more =D

[Saphira]

BUT WHY

Where did I go wrong?
Without you could I still go on?
I gave my all...
But why we have to fall?
I gave up my dignity
Though you denied my identity
Realizing that you don't love me anymore
Crushes me to the very core
Why you have to lie?
And let me weep before your very eye?
Why you have to desert me completely?
And yet, did you really love me?
I want to believe you did
Because at this very moment you're all that I need
But the sorrow thinking that you might all regret
What keeps hunting me that I couldn't forget
Recalling the time when you're happy with someone else
Puts me and my entire emotions in a mess!
Merciless, you let me die in vain,
Countless, you let me swallow all this pain!
I've already accepted that we really are for apart
But why you have to break my heart?
I just couldn't help but cry,
For our time would be soon to say goodbye!

[raincoatgirl]

Those are good