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Post by Chibi Jen on Feb 24, 2005 1:33:26 GMT 10
Thats a sad song lyric, but I like it hehe.. if only there was a song that fitted this lovely piece ^_^
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Post by PayPay on Apr 1, 2005 12:19:52 GMT 10
(_No Name_ by Patience -- Jan. 6, 2004) You left it, You left her on her own, She's broken, She doesn't know where to go,
Your hearless, and you left the one who-
LOVED YOU! She was all for you, You Psycho! She can't live without you and you... Left her.
((This song isn't finished but I remember the beat and rhythm perfectly to finish it. I based this song on a story I read in English. I don't recall the name but there is this Scientist that picks up this dog (as a puppy and raises her.) And the dog is his only friend. Well he ends up leaving, going to the Moon for research, and in a couple months, she dies over grief. :/ How sad...))
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Post by Sakura on Apr 1, 2005 13:25:12 GMT 10
aww..poor puppy. anyways, the lyrics sounds great so far. I kinda feel a beat when I say it. ;D Keep up the good work!
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Post by PayPay on Apr 4, 2005 5:07:56 GMT 10
aww..poor puppy. anyways, the lyrics sounds great so far. I kinda feel a beat when I say it. ;D Keep up the good work! ^^ Thankies, Sakura!! Yeah, the story was really sad. Poor Scientist, having to live with it x.x ------------------------------------------------------------- This next song was another song I wrote during Algebra >> It's just a little song without a chorus, just that is kinda a bit of a speaking, rapish, yet singing song. XD I have no clue what the crap you call that but yeah. The verses in it are suppose to have a rhyming speaking part, but some parts in the verses your suppose to sing or hold out. >> If you can catch it. AWESOME. XD My friend, who is also writes her own lyrics liked this song. The song is actually based on how I felt about my classes that semester, in that moment. ^^ -------------------------------------------------------------- ~~~When we Graduate~~~ by: P.D. (XD)
Algebra is a bummer, we don't like to solve equavilent fractions while we're trying to live out our life.
Biology is driving me wild, let's stop drawing cells and start drawing out our life line.
World History is dropping bombs, What the Romans' did for us was aight'.
Chorus isn't dat bad, but the notes are jumping all over the staff like I was back in black. Snotty girls, respectful guys are not singing the song of life for long...
for long...
Oh, highschool drives us crazy, but it'll be okay when we graduate that day, hopefully not in the next 80s'.
It's all about what we wear, or how our hair looks today. But it'll be okay when we graduate.
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Post by PayPay on Apr 4, 2005 5:24:12 GMT 10
I wrote this song very recently, and as some of you may know alot of my songs are based on real situations or my acutal feelings. Usual when I want to put a message through the lyrics, I somehow change it into being part of that message and something else that may not have anything to do with me, or any real situation or feelings. That sometimes happens when I am "Feeling" the flow of the song and get something better out... ----------------------------------------------------------------------- My Parents -- 3/24/05 -- written by P.D.
Intro 1: My parents, they told me that everything would be ok---
Intro 2: Yeah, I'm scared (I'm scared) but they said (they said) it will be okay (Repeat) Ok! Yeah!
VS 1: From the day I was born, maybe before, I was mistaken My Parents told me lies, made me cry, I was stupid---
Chorus: My parents said, that everything would be ok--- Yeah, I'm scared but they said it will be ok
Vs 2: Since I was young, so young, I was lied to, My parents they broke my trust, I was murdered---
Vs 3: I was broken since the day I was born, Those liars, I'm a disastor, waiting to happen, They killed me,
(Repeat Intro 1 and 2) (Repeat chorus) They said it would be okay------ So why am I... Alone?
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Post by Chibi Jen on Apr 7, 2005 11:54:34 GMT 10
ah...thats really well written .. the content is upsetting though.. I hope you're feeling better, and not cheated by your parents..
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Post by Sailor Comett on Apr 8, 2005 8:09:02 GMT 10
*sniff* Excellently well written (as Jen said)... makes me cry though... (invoking (sp?) emotion, the mark of talent, Pay!) I do hope you're ok though *hugs*
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Post by PayPay on Jun 12, 2005 13:59:03 GMT 10
I think I was upset with someone. Lol. It was four days after my birthday and I have no clue who it is about but I must of been so upset I just felt like writing it out into a song (Like I like to do) and didn't get a very nice beat. This song needs to be fixed. ------------------------------------------------------- A Mistake -- 4-28-05 -- By Patience
(Pre Chorus) You think you can get away, You honestly think you can get away with that, But I wont let you get away! You wont get away tonight!
(Chorus) You made a mistake, I think your fake, and I don't like you anymore.
(Vs. 1) Lies suck big monkies, I think it's funny, How you still wanna be my friend.
(Vs. 2) Yet when you lied, our friendship it died, And when I call, it's not me, It's Bob, You made everything so hard, (Pre Chorus) (Chorus)
(Vs. 3)I've let you slip through my heart, You've left your mark, an ill disease, I'm surrounded by your constant hate,
(Vs. 4) We used to be good friends, but like everything else it must end, I will repeat it over and over again!
(Loudly) Well you lied! Your not gonna get away!
(Pre Chorus -- Slow and gentle)
(Loud) But I wont let you!
(chorus) (during chorus) Your Mistake wasn't off the chain! It made me fall in pain! And I don't like you! Anymore...
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Post by PayPay on Jun 12, 2005 14:07:16 GMT 10
Shut your mouth -- 4-27-05 -- by Patience
(Vs. 1) I've had to hide my feelings all my life, So why should I end tradition now? She loves you, you love her, I wont answer your question. I want you, to love me. But I wont answer now----
(Chorus) My heart, it bleeds, I'm always doing good deeds (for you) For you, I will, Shut my mouth
You say it's ok, But I'm sure it's not, (for you) For you, I lie, Shut your mouth!
(Vs. 2) Your so depressed I can't even stress, how much you make me sick, She loves you, I love you, I wont answer that question, You want me, but you want her, Stop asking that stupid question!
(Repeat Chorus) ... Shut your mouth! Again!
(Guitar solo)
(Repeat Chorus in background twice) Shut your Mouth! It bleeds. Stupid good deeds. For you! Shut my mouth. It's ok! For you! I LIE! CRY! Shut your mouth.
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Post by PayPay on Jul 10, 2005 4:38:11 GMT 10
Not Once - date:Unknown Amended: July 9 2005-- Lyricist: Patience Vs. 1 - It's all false hope they say, But I'll never be okay, Without your love
Vs. 2 - I can't think clear, It's all turning into dreadful fear, Because you don't care
Chours - Can you tell me You never loved me, Never ever dropped a single tear for me?
Can you say, You never felt the same way? Never ever wished you could hold me... Not once? -End Chorus-
Vs. 3 - I'm diein to know, Why did you make me think You really cared and loved me too
Vs. 4 - But you stabbed me hard, When I was off gaurd, and now I know the truth---
Chours - Can you tell me You never loved me, (Love me?) Never ever dropped a single tear for me?
Can you say, You never felt the same way? (About me!) Never ever wished you could hold me... Not once?---------- -End Chorus- (Slow down music) Can you tell me... Why you hurt me so bad... Can you tell me... You never cared once... Not... Once...
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Post by Chibi Jen on Jul 10, 2005 20:50:10 GMT 10
yay, more lyrics from our local lyricist PayPay You're doing a good job on them. *thumbs up*
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Post by PayPay on Aug 22, 2005 8:22:25 GMT 10
< Under my Bed > by PayPay of Nov. 1, 2004
(Vs1) My breath is cold, and I can't hear you, with my window closed, And as I hug my pillow, I can see that it's creeping out from under my bed.
(Chorus) Ever so closer, Every so nearer, (It's crawing from under my bed), My grip it tightens, my heart beating stops (*Pause*) in the middle of my song
It can hear me, yet I'm scared it doesn't fear me, (It howls from under my bed), My tears are followed by their own sobs in the middle of the night! (Howl) (End Chorus) (Guitar Solo)
(Vs2) My blood is racing, And I hear you scream, outside my door, and as I hide under my cover, I can hear it over my head
(Repeat Chorus)
In the middle of the night... It's crawing from under my bed...
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Post by PayPay on Aug 22, 2005 8:41:55 GMT 10
< I'd give > by PayPay of [Unknown Date]
(Vs1) I'm sitting in the middle of the corridor, fixing my papers, picking my books up, letting my hair slip against my bottom lip.
I watch you as you walk by and the teachers frowned but I saw you smile...
(Vs2) I took my pills in the local park again, drinking my water, wishing it was chocolate milk, letting my hand slip down the rusted chains
I felt you as you walked by and the parents stared but I heard you laugh
(Chorus) And I'd give up anything, and everything just to be with you, I'd stop my tears, and drop my fears and give you all my shoes.
And I'd give up anything, and everything just to be with you, I'd stop my hate, and drop my pain, and give you all my food And that's not everything, that's not everything, Not everything....
(Vs3) I'm leaning on my Window here, writing this song, humming the words, sketching the emotion, letting my lids close part way down
I sensed you as you stood outside my window, and the neighbors yelled and I saw you... cry...
(Chorus) And I'd give up anything... everything Just to be with you I'd leave this town, and pack my bags and give you a goodnight kiss too, And that's not everything, That's not everything, I'd do for you.
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Post by PayPay on Sept 14, 2005 23:20:48 GMT 10
::Just Smile::
They think I'm what I'm not, Their always licking their snot, and if you think I'm in their crew, YOU CAN EAT YOUR SHOE!
Cause' I'm not the girl nextdoor, and I live in a diffrent world, but if you'll think of me, Just smile...
We've never been close but we connect, and it seems like this is my last breath, I'm dreaming of you and hanging on, SO STAY STRONG!
Cause' I'm not the girl nextdoor, and I live in a diffrent world, and if you think of me, and if you think of me... (smile) **Repeat Chorus**
Just Smile... (x2)
((I have placed this here in behalf of the fact that I am using the first post to show you a few things I have written that are not finished but I plan on finishing. If you want to comment on them, or even help me, please quote the lyric! Thank yous guys.))
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Post by Sakura on Sept 27, 2005 7:38:36 GMT 10
Wowz, Just Smile is pretty good so far. Though for lyrics...XD :
that is kinda...funny. haha.
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