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Post by Chibi Jen on Oct 17, 2004 10:42:25 GMT 10
I liked how you integrated the story into this ^^ It reminds me the fact that Ami just got back with the others.
Got confused here. Why is Kunzite talking to Sailor Luna, when Venus is the one who attacked her?
muahaah.. I know who that is!! XD
I donno.. I mean~ its nice for Venus to get some credit and stuff.. But I think u over did it a bit ^^;; You gave her too much fame.. becomes a little artifical.
Other than that~ GREAT JOB! I liked it a lot ^^ Good luck too.
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Post by Digital Leonardo on Oct 17, 2004 10:52:35 GMT 10
'Cause Sailor Luna is the one holding the shards and he is trying to get them back. He says 'Stupid child… You can not stop me!' to Venus.
You think? She always seems to come to the rescue early on... Owell. Its not like Toei is going to phone me up and ask to make the episode ^^
Thanks for reading Jen, and giving me the feedback. You seem to be the only one taking time to give real feed back.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Oct 17, 2004 10:59:16 GMT 10
'Cause Sailor Luna is the one holding the shards and he is trying to get them back. He says 'Stupid child… You can not stop me!' to Venus. Oh! I got confused cause he said "child" ^^ Na.. don't worry~ I enjoyed it anyway XD It's a good story, and you've written it well I'm gonna read ur rewrite after my exams ^^ I'm sure the other members will also come around and read it sometime!
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