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Post by moonbunny on Oct 28, 2005 13:30:10 GMT 10
Here's one of my many poems:
Bang! Is the sound I here in the Morning.
Boom! Is the sound I here at Noon.
Klang! Is the sound I here in the afternoon.
Crash! Is the sound I here in the early evening.
Bash! Is the sound I here late at night.
These are all sounds of war.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Oct 31, 2005 9:25:51 GMT 10
Hey moonbunny, good use of Onomatopoeia, with a little twist at the end. It's sorta short though, as you could be a little more descriptive but I guess it has its good points this way  |
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Post by moonbunny on Oct 31, 2005 15:07:42 GMT 10
Yeah, well I had to write that last year for school and we had to use 6-8 lines. I have some more poems. *looks around messy room.* When I find them, I'll put them up.
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Post by moonbunny on Nov 13, 2005 13:25:29 GMT 10
Here's another one;
Peace:
Peace is as calm as the ocean
Peace is as white as a freash blanket of snow
Peace is like a newly fallen star
Peace is as soft as baby rabbits
Peace moves like a river through the sand
Peace is as calm as a meadow
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Post by sailorfire on Nov 14, 2005 18:17:07 GMT 10
i like the one about peace. strange, i wanted to write something like that too.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Nov 23, 2005 10:31:40 GMT 10
Nice Peace poem... but peace is like a newly fallen star? O.o
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Post by The Goodess of Destruction on Aug 18, 2006 5:58:56 GMT 10
i really like the poem about peace is cute.
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