ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Jan 25, 2005 10:17:02 GMT 10
thank you arigato! *bonzi* Im done ^_~
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ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
Posts: 208
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Jan 25, 2005 10:20:29 GMT 10
Maybe if i had someone anyone Id actually be able to show the real me but. No one gives me a choice I cant pick I cant choose who i get noone someone evil or mean Im teased for being quiet or alone I have friends backstabers liers and cheaters they talk to much about idols or guys when they ask me what kind of guy id choose i say anyone who gives me a choice gives me a chance and i can get along with but i really want
a friend first.
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ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
Posts: 208
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Jan 25, 2005 10:36:40 GMT 10
why oh why did you really have to cry cuase did it hurt so bad to make you so sad? Or where you more then angrey and filled with distrust and dispare come'on and trust me Ive felt that way but ive never had the curage to say
I really have to cry It hurt so bad to make me this sad I was more then angrey filled with distrust and dispare come on i trust yah
Give me a chance to talk to you and open up to you I know if you actually got close to someone you would be able to get it all off your chest
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Post by Chibi Jen on Jan 25, 2005 15:15:57 GMT 10
Interesting.. sounds more like a dialouge between two people. Is the last two lines apart of the poem? Cause lines usually arent that long ^^;; Nice good work.
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ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
Posts: 208
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Jan 26, 2005 5:06:09 GMT 10
actually the last part is like a saying or somethin i read about adding those to a ppoem or song in a book. and thanks!!
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ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
Posts: 208
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Feb 2, 2005 6:12:03 GMT 10
hm. my parents gave me a choice. When i go into 10th grade i can go somewhere for a year . i need to choose nownmso i can learn language and etc. im not sure where!@ can you help me
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gekogoth009
Chibi Guardian
so I am breakable................
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Post by gekogoth009 on Feb 2, 2005 6:57:23 GMT 10
im taking italian,so why do u take a lang,and like next year u chose?but where would u have to go,and kick ash poems
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ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
Posts: 208
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Feb 2, 2005 8:07:20 GMT 10
thanks!!!! so ill think about what yah said.
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ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
Posts: 208
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Feb 5, 2005 11:19:05 GMT 10
A Battle Never Done
It lies in your heart forever more. The fire rageing, burning with your emotions. Till your nothin more then a shell holding more war that is battleing never done. So as the battle rages and your breaking. Remember that there is always a victor. The victor will maybe just be you. So fight back with your emotional strength. The fire of anger in your heart will be swept away by the water of truth and kindness. Take up a sword and stop the final blow. Though be warned its battle nevr done.
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ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Feb 5, 2005 11:29:17 GMT 10
Thorn Heart
I was hurt. My heart broke. Ill hide away from everyone. The tower in my heart, coverd with briar with the small room just for me, will close. I will lock it from inside useing a briar vine. The briar's thorns will grow longer and sharper till they touch the walls of my heart. Till the pionts penatrate my beating heart. I will sit there in my room, pushing the thorns through deeper. If anyone reaches out to touch my heart my briar will pierce thier hands. But a problem with the thorns is, soon they'll pierce me to.
those poems are kinda lame so please no mean remarks.
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gekogoth009
Chibi Guardian
so I am breakable................
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Post by gekogoth009 on Feb 6, 2005 14:15:50 GMT 10
i love'em
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Post by Sakura on Feb 7, 2005 8:46:40 GMT 10
Thorn Heart. I like the title. ^^"
You used briar quite a few times, though I have no idea what it means. XD lol.
you two, please stay on topic. ^_^"
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ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Feb 7, 2005 8:53:38 GMT 10
Thorn Heart. I like the title. ^^"
You used briar quite a few times, though I have no idea what it means. XD lol.
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briar is a thorn vine that grows on towers and old buildings. ussually used in fantasy stories and thanks
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Post by Sakura on Feb 7, 2005 8:55:44 GMT 10
oh, alright. ^_^" Now that I know what it is. I get the poem better. lol
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ShadowSpinner
Starlight Chibi
hm. whats this feeling? hate? love? hurt? kindness?
Posts: 208
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Post by ShadowSpinner on Feb 7, 2005 8:57:37 GMT 10
do you think i should explian it on the bottom of the poem?
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