lilith
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Post by lilith on Apr 18, 2006 2:33:39 GMT 10
This is a new one I wrote about a week ago. Enjoy! When I stare into those exotic eyes The world around me starts to dissolve When i am touched by those delicate hands in that gentle grasp I am indulged When you embrace me with your loving arms I know I'm always safe When you tell me that your here for me There is no better place No better place than right here Inside your loving heart No better place than in your arms From which I'll never part My love for you is so immense I think that you might know You always wash my sorrows away Just like the pure white snow But my friend, we must now part Yet before we say adieu I have but one more thing to say And it is, that I love you.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Apr 26, 2006 19:06:50 GMT 10
aww..how sweet and romantic XD
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lilith
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Post by lilith on Apr 27, 2006 7:05:00 GMT 10
Thaks Chibi Jen
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Post by The Goodess of Destruction on May 6, 2006 4:30:16 GMT 10
i really like all you poems, i make 3 poems that i like but i really dont know how to translate to english my first language is spanish. ok back on topic i really really like the first one i mean it remember me a lot of someone that i love and i thank you for that keep writing and practicing you are good on making poems.
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lilith
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Post by lilith on May 8, 2006 3:11:48 GMT 10
Thank you soo much Thats probably one of the nicest things someone has ever said to me about my poetry. My first language is also Spanish! (I'm from Puerto Rico ) Here's another Poem that I wrote lately Silky smooth Long brunet Gentle curls Beside your neck Extravagant eyes The shade of brown Those eyes that make My world go round Soft warm lips Upon your face Which in a kiss I shall embrace And a perfect Curved young body Which I wish Would touch nobody Touch no one Except for me for you're love Has set me free And I would die of jealousy If someone else Love you like me.
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Post by Chibi Jen on May 24, 2006 23:59:06 GMT 10
omg, it rythmes...and it sounds cool! XD
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Post by Death Soldier on May 25, 2006 14:36:04 GMT 10
Silky smooth Long brunet Gentle curls Beside your neck Extravagant eyes The shade of brown Those eyes that make My world go round Soft warm lips Upon your face Which in a kiss I shall embrace And a perfect Curved young body Which I wish Would touch nobody Touch no one Except for me for you're love Has set me free And I would die of jealousy If someone else Love you like me. Yeh, it ryhmes nicely =) Neat Poem Lilith~ You should really make titles for them.
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lilith
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Post by lilith on May 26, 2006 7:25:12 GMT 10
THANK YOU!!!
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Post by lilith on Jul 29, 2006 9:32:39 GMT 10
I wrote this one about 4 months ago:
MY SIN. Oh dear God forgive me For I have done it again Tried to leave this all behind In this cold unfeeling pain
This twisted sick addiction Which so violently controls me The thing that I most fear And yet every night consoles me
I can't help it, I can't stop it No matter how hard I try I'm twistedly addicted To this cold unfeeling crime
The addiction I most fear The verb I most regret Is the feeling that reassures me Every night inside my bed
Every time I do it I scream inside my head "Make it stop! Go away" The addiction I most dread
How many times Have I told my self to stop How many nights have I cried As to the floor I drop
Countless times I'm sure I've gone down with sick addiction As I cut my self again I cry Leaving behind behind all my ambition
Cutting down my future Every time I cut myself Damaging my dreams And along it goes my health
As I press the knife Deeper and deeper in I decide to stop as I look up My face bearing an insane grin
This is it, I want it all to stop I want to make the fatal blow I turn around and see your face In my heart you start a glow
I'm remembering the promise I made to you that day A promise I've now broken Over and over again
I look up at your teary face And whisper that I'm sorry And for one last time I draw blood from my body. -------------------------------------------
I made tis one about to months ago:
THE TRUTH Why do I have to love you so much? I've always loved you I've longed for your touch
Do you know how many times I cry for you in despair How many times I think Does any body care?
And I know that's being stupid Because I know your always there I know that thats just ignorance I know you truly care
But all this time I've kept my love And told my self That it's all bluff
I've never told you this Because you were in pain So I kept it to my self As I sat there in the rain
You're the only thing That I think about all day I think about your smile And how you came my way
But all this time I've kept inside The love thats mine Which I must hide
Because I don't want you to look at me differently I want your smile to stay Ever so heavenly
All the poems that I wrote Don't you know they were for you? All the verses, comas, quotes, Don't you know that they were true?
Don't you know I've loved you Since almost 2 years ago in fact And all this time I've played along And just learned how to act
It's OK if you don't love me back Just know that I love you Just listen to the words I speak And remember, their all true.
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Post by Chibi Jen on Jul 30, 2006 15:50:23 GMT 10
woah..the [My Sin] poem is...freaky!! O.o but pretty good~~ The second poem is a little sad..
Nice to see u back here Lilith ^^
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Post by lilith on Jul 31, 2006 3:49:18 GMT 10
Thanks!
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Post by The Goodess of Destruction on Aug 14, 2006 0:26:14 GMT 10
nice to see you lilitt i like you poem.
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