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Post by sailorfire on Nov 10, 2004 18:02:56 GMT 10
hmm it sounds like you are describing sailor venus but even if you are not, it is very cool, for 10 minutes!
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Post by Digital Leonardo on Nov 10, 2004 18:08:02 GMT 10
DING DING DING! WE hAve a WINNER! Sailor Venus is who it is!!! Orange Silk, Blond Hair^^ Hehe. Now, I guess you guys by now can see I have Venus on the Brain.
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Post by Sailor Comett on Nov 12, 2004 12:51:25 GMT 10
I liked it, well done ;D
I don't like, however, how she said it was a little repetitive... it's a poem! repetition is a well acknowledged poetic device! lol, oh well...
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Post by Digital Leonardo on Jun 9, 2005 8:31:40 GMT 10
These were for English... They were part of a joint booklet for my final project. 'Mosquito' (2005)
Crawling over bright flesh
Long dark legs itching every step
Filtering eyes, watching every inch
It smells the blood, rushing under the skin
Its lips water at the feel of every touch
Breaking the rose ice
Shattering the surface
Gushing
Splattering
An ocean of crimson seep
Sipping
Endearing
A buffet of red water devoured in seconds
Full
Done
Its lagre wings flap
It buzzes by like a blind bat
The Blood
Addicting
Alcoholic 'Cat' (2005)
A Cat
Nothing but a filthy rat
Crawling around the unclean streets
Fighting for a peice of mean
Untamed Hair
Diamond sharp glair
Pure yellow eyes
Given nine sinly lives
A full blown killer
In the body
Of a dirty little Rat 'Hunted' (2005)
I run,
I hide,
I try to escape the fear,
My feet tire,
I must have been running for hours.
The roars and growls echo threw the ally,
It's following me,
Its foot steps crush the broken glass spread along the ground.
I tried to yell for help,
I try to scream,
I fail to make a noise.
Dead End,
I pound on the brick wall,
My hands start to bleed,
i try to break out,
I try.
It comes closer
I pound on the brick wall again.
My life flashes before me,
Events I rejoiced,
And Events I despised.
It comes closer,
I close my eyes,
I know the end is finally here.
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Post by Sailor Comett on Jun 9, 2005 8:38:22 GMT 10
Most excellent Digilee!! Especially 'Cat'... although I love cats and have been a cat person all my life, I really liked it! I love this line!
In 'Mosquito' I loved this:
Great stuff!! I wouldn't be shocked to see this stuff published. How multi-talented are you!!!!
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Post by Digital Leonardo on Jun 30, 2005 10:08:36 GMT 10
Most excellent Digilee!! Especially 'Cat'... although I love cats and have been a cat person all my life, I really liked it! I love this line! In 'Mosquito' I loved this: Great stuff!! I wouldn't be shocked to see this stuff published. How multi-talented are you!!!! Your to nice! Mulit-talented? No... not really. I killed to make those poems... something I don't do on my free time. School only, and maybe request... Anyways, everyone thanks for nicenice comments! |
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